Look over these sentence
fragments.
The drunken face of McCarthy mocking people.
Because the river is rising.
Although there may have been two gunshots.
Some to jail, some into exile, others into
insane asylums.
What makes these fragments is their lack of a
main verb. Without a verb, these fragments cannot describe a complete
action. Instead, they are subordinate clauses -- words that take orders
instead of giving them.
Look for the connecting word which might join the
fragment to an independent clause:
We need more sandbags because the river is
rising.
Although there may have been two gunshots,
most people still believe Oswald killed Kennedy.
Change the participle (-ing) to a main verb:
The drunken face of McCarthy mocks people.
Use the fragment as a participal phrase:
The drunken face of McCarthy mocking people is
a lurid reminder of a bad time in American politics.
Or simply insert a main verb:
After the trials, people seemed to disappear:
some to jail, some into exile, others into insane asylums.
Sometimes, in descriptive writing, verbless
sentences can be effective:
Nice to see living things that don't know
anything about future troubles or death of Committees. (Hellman, 92)
You dirty rat!
A day of dappled, sea-borne clouds.... (James
Joyce, A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man)
In such sentences, the main verb is understood,
and the author is trying for the effect of words spoken in the head --
thoughtful, angry, shocked, or bemused. The writer of such verbless
sentences should use them both sparingly and intentionally, taking
careful note of their effect in a whole passage.
Sentence Fragments
Comma Splices
Run-on Sentences
Dangling or Misplaced Modifiers
Subject-Verb Agreement
Split Infinitives
Which, That, It, and Of
Semi-colons and Colons
Apostrophes
His and Her
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